前回の填詞「水龍吟(観輪椅籃球)」の英訳です

Title: “The Water Dragon Poetry which is one of the musics of Tianci is composed about ‘Wheelchair basketball’”

The five people who was the particularly outstanding experts,
in the sports ground, made their wheelchairs to run fast.

Wanted to get a ball,
they used the deep stratagem and the tactics many times over.

To break through that their opponents guarded against them,
they knew about the position of the opening,
and immediately, they started to attack the enemy’s lines.

At last, they threw the ball far away,
and their companies caught the ball with their full effort,
to get three points with throwing three-point shots,
and they competed to show their players’ specialties
that made their proper properties which were known beneath the sun widely.

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The five people of the players were different abilities each other.
And the extends of their physical injury (their barriers)
were also different.

The players of the serious injury
supported the players of the slight injury.
And the players of the slight injury were active.
And the five people’s feelings were not different.

We know that it is not from our feelings of affection and compassion
that we are impressed here.
We enjoy naturally, and we do not use fine language
and we do not keep up appearances.

With my full effort, I will intonate the poetry
about the moments of the Wheelchair basketball games.
And I want to make my feelings of joy and fun to know everybody.
And I hope to see the everybody’s expression of joy.


Masaya Samura (pen name: Gensai Shirakawa) in Osaka, Japan
(at September 14, 2016 (for September 13))

この記事へのコメント

  • 美舟

    英訳。
    本当に凄いです。
    外国の方々にも分かって頂ける事でしょうね。
    英訳は大変だとは思われますが、注目させて頂きます。
    ますますのご活躍を期待しております。
    2016年09月16日 00:35
  • 佐村 昌哉(筆名:白川 玄齋)

    > 美舟さん

    こんにちは。温かいコメントをありがとうございます。

    単語に関しては改めて辞書を引くことも多く、
    毎回の英訳がとても勉強になっています。

    大小の訂正点も何度かあって、それを細かく訂正することもあります。
    更に進歩していくことが必要だなと思っています。

    外国の方にも分かって頂けるような英訳をしっかりと目指していきます。
    これからも一つ一つ地道に頑張っていきます。

    美舟さんも良い金曜日の一日をお過ごし下さい。
    2016年09月16日 11:42